<...> Please understand my bitterness, but I simply cannot afford programme cost forto pay around 30 thousand pounds, for the programme while living in a country with onethat has some of the lowest average income aroundincomes in the world. Within a year I am planning to grow my savings to up to 20 thousand pounds over the course of a year, and take a loan for up to 3 thousand pounds; a bigger loan for education programmeprogrammes is not available in Ukraine as well as I, nor am notI eligible for credit in the UK. I could not ask my single parent for help either.
Therefore, I would like to kindly ask you to pass my message
on to the committee with theand request tothat they review my application to elucidateand tell me why my applicationit was rejected. This information will help me to navigate throughlearn from my mistakes and to improvedo better on my next scholarship application next time. I have a huge determinationam very determined to study at the Bartlett School of Architecture, and I will do everything possiblein my power to achieve mythis goal.

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